Praying Mantes

Friday morning I was going to the barn to take pictures of the Filly and I almost stepped on this creature.

Webster defines “Mantis” as “any of various large insects of the order Mantodea that catch insects or other small animals with their powerful forelegs.”I guess that would certainly describe this being. I was instantly enamored; I dropped my purse and camera case and just started taking pictures until he walked away and disappeared within the flora.

A few hours later, my husband told me to bring the camera outside because he’d found one this time. So I took some more pictures.

My husband’s mantis on my hand

Speaking of my husband, Roland reminded me that this was the second year we had put out mantis egg cases, so we could be seeing many more mantes.

My thoughts are late and in the form of a poem!

2008 SCBWI CONFERENCE

Coville Amazing

Most Speakers Excellent

Illustrators’ sights to behold

Wish

Critique groups

Met every night

Smooth schedules

Nine-hundred-twenty overwhelming

Timing and flow still very impressive

Paint the Town Red

Fun concept

Location nice

Food very good

EIGHT-HUNDRED women, no chocolate

Just Crazy

Paint the Town Red

Music way too loud

Couldn’t hear lyrics

Or

Feel Rhythm

Lacked oldies, but goodies

Next Time

Vary Music

Soft and loud

Slow and fast dance

Great effort

Only slightly missed

The beat

Update on Carrera – the beautiful black filly

At four and half months old, she is more than half as tall as her mother is. Her black mane is four-five inches long and I think her tail will be black, but right now, it has some gray in it.

However, THE MOST UNUSAL THING–the BROWN BEAUTY is now a BLACK BEAUTY, except for the feathers in her ears-they are still brown.

She still nurses and follows her mother around.

She is still so loving that it is difficult to take her picture-she will follow me or step out of the picture I have her framed in to get closer to me.

Carrera has teeth now and she loves to bite and does it ever hurt; she isn’t trying to hurt me; she’s still investigating things and at this point she might be developing a bad habit. I’m not familiar enough with horses to know the difference.

She still tries to nuzzle my face, but now that she has teeth, I’m afraid to let her get that close to my face, even if she just wants to give me another kiss.

There are more pictures in the “children’s” section and look for future updates!

Obsession with Dragonflies, but I’m not going “Oding” quite yet.

The observation of Dragonflies known as Oding* (not to be confused with OD’ing.)

Dragonflies remind me of the bi-wing airplanes, maybe because I was aware of the airplanes first. Most children would have discovered a big insect like a dragonfly, especially since they are unusual: large multifaceted eyes, elongated body and two pairs of transparent wings that stay separated from their body, and they come in beautiful colors. I didn’t though, other than studying them in school and knowing they were ancient creatures. I don’t remember even seeing one until we bought a house with a pool.

When I lived in Manhattan Beach, I remember a lazy summer afternoon drifting around on a deep blue float in our azure pool. I kept seeing movement, but I thought it was a humming bird. I rolled over on the float and for the next few minutes, I watched this breathtakingly stunning animal hover over the water and dip in for a drink and then he flew away.

I was hooked–binoculars and dragonfly guides. I’ve seen them all over since that day over twenty years ago. They were always there, but it took that flicker of movement and the bright color to open my hazel eyes.

I’m going outside to get in my hot tub. Why don’t I just admit it–I’M GOING ODING!

All my partners love dragonflies, too; just ask them!

 

 

* From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Photo: “Blue Dragonfly”, by Tanakawho

Photo: “pattern-in-nature 1″, by Tanakawho

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WE’VE MOVED ON TO BIGGER & BETTER THINGS!

Check out our new and improved site at:

www.kritiquekritics.com

It has something for everyone. We have a BLOG, writers’ websites, children’s section, art, etc. I don’t want to spoil the fun of looking inside our new home. It’s only a week old, so all the furniture hasn’t arrived yet and a few rooms still have to be painted. But, you can tell we went for LOCATION, LOCATION, LOCATION!

See you there.

Teamwork

I’ve been so busy writing and working lately that I hadn’t taken time out to watch the Olympics. But the other night, I figured I had to make an exception for Michael Phelps’ last race.

He had already made a stunning performance at this year’s games, tying Mark Spitz’s record of seven gold medals in one Olympics. Now he was going for eight. When I came in to watch it, I was expecting to see one great athlete on his quest to make history.

What I didn’t expect was that he would not do it alone.

Phelps’ final race was a relay…and he wasn’t even the last one to swim. His contribution mattered immensely, of course; but his record-setting gold medal depended upon the collective victory of his team. I tried to imagine how he felt, as he watched Cullen Jones, Garrett Weber-Gale, and Jason Lezak compete; and I thought I could understand what might be going through the minds of the others. Especially the one who swam last.

If I had been in Jason Lezak’s place—coming from behind in the final leg of the race—I would have wanted to do everything in my power to succeed.

Which is exactly what he did.

With the help of his team, Michael Phelps got his eighth gold medal. Together, the team set a world record.

Welcome to our blog

Coincidentally, I’m the fourth member of the writing team that is behind this brand-new version of the Kritique Kritics blog. I’m coming from behind—I don’t have anything in print yet, and am way behind my team members in knowledge of writing and publishing. I have so much admiration for Jim, Debra, and Laurie. They are amazing writers, and valued friends.

Each one of us is in a quest for our own “gold medal.” For me, that means the publication of my novel this year. I’m coming from behind—carbon monoxide poisoning set my career back by several years. So when this novel hits print, it will be a personal victory beyond words for me.

Yet, I know one thing for sure:

I won’t do it alone.

Photo: “Golden Rope, a Gleam in the Night” by cobalt123


Debra’s Oatmeal Chocolate Chip Cookies Recipe

BOWL ONE

3/4 – 1 Cup Brown Sugar

3/4 – 1 Cup Sugar

1 Stick Butter

½ Cup Crisco or 1 Stick Butter

1 teaspoon Vanilla

2 Eggs

BOWL TWO

2 Cups All Purpose Flour

1 Cup Oatmeal (1 minute)

1 Teaspoon Baking Soda

1 Teaspoon Salt

1/2 Teaspoon Allspice, Cinnamon, Cloves

1/4 Teaspoon Ginger, Nutmeg

1-12oz bag of Semi-Sweet chocolate chips or whatever kind you prefer.

Preheat oven to 325 o – 375 o

Mix BOWL TWO and set aside.

Mix BOWL ONE, except eggs by hand or with blender until creamy. Add eggs, mix. Add contends of BOWL TWO a little at a time, until gone. Add chips.

Bake at 325-375 degrees for 10-14 minutes. I like crunchy cookies so I bake mine for 14 minutes at 350o

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I have tweaked this recipe on and off for too long and I finally think it’s just about perfect! It started years ago when I accidentally doubled the sugars in a batch and it tasted wonderful. The next push was when my friend, Carol Poling, made Oatmeal Chocolate Chip Cookies, about 25 years ago, and I never forgot the taste. I had to be able to make Carol’s cookies or something just as good so I’ve been experimenting on the oatmeal and spices, for only five-ten years, and finally we have the:

DEBRA’S TWEAKED OATMEAL CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES

Don’t tell my husband, but I’ve had this recipe for a while. I just love to bake cookies! It’s our little secret.

Conference

What?
Writers are supposed to do research, right?

More thoughts on the Conference

During the SCBWI conference I had such ups and downs. One minute I was thrilled to be away from home around exciting people the next I was lonely for my family and just wanted a peaceful hug from my daughter. One minute I was confident in my writing while the next my self-esteem was in the toilet. But I did come away with a sobering epiphany: Art-World I is not even near ready to send to publishers. And I know why. It is still plot driven rather than character driven. I haven’t been staying inside my character’s skin. Instead I was trying to write exciting events or put pretty words on the page.
Not any more.
From now on I am going to look at every sentence as if it were in my character’s mouth. All of the metaphors, descriptions, and feelings will come from him/her instead of Laurie.
It is time to do major surgery to Art-World.
Wish me luck.

Welcome to our new and Improved BLOG!

Welcome to our new and improved BLOG and website combo. We would like to thank Christine Taylor for all her hard work and youth in getting us transferred over to something more modern and so much nicer. Our previous Blog was very nice; I can say that as the designer the person who maintained it. I had no idea how fancy you could get and we just let Christine run with the ball. She is a beautiful artist and a great web designer. I am happy to be her new apprentice.

Great Job Christine!